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I selected this topic to help each other.here you can find the details:
those who want to join with us have to write short paragraph about Oman and the first one has the right to be checked.
the other participants have to find the mistakes either(spelling,word order,grammar,punctuation,missing word and .....so on.later on I will add my comments.This is the first way and I'm ready to listen to your decition if you have.....see you later.

Nice idea my dear
I will come back to participate
good luck

hope the idea is clear,I'm waiting.

great idea my dear i will back soon

thanks for your topic

I'm waiting.

I'm realy sad that I accept some of you will start their contribution to help each other,if you find it difficult I'm here to help.please feel free if you have any suggestion or if something is not clear.

Oman is( ) beautiful country. It has many intersting places. There are many people from other country() come to see these places. For examples of beautiful places in oman:Nizwa and Bahla forts, wadi Al-hokeen in Al-Rusta....ect
When we go to like these places you will be intersted. But the weather of Oman sometimes will affect your intersted. Because as we know oman has hot weather in the summar.
These short discrebtion of my country. I love my country so much.

THanks alot for Shatha and Sout Alfajer for thier trys.Now I will give you the time for both of you and the others to find the mistakes.thr brantheses means something missing,while the coloured words either spelling mistakes ,capital or puctuation marks.Try to do the best.


note:the rest pleas don't add your paragragh till we check your classmates 'mistakes.
thanks again.

Thank you my dear
You mean now we have to write it again without mistakes or what???

Hi dear,Yes that's right.Just see my comments and try to find the mistakes.
goodluck.see you later.

Oman is( a) beautiful country. It has many intersting places. There are many people from other country(ies) come to see these places. For examples :Nizwa , Bahla forts, wadi Al-hokeen in Al-Rusta....ect
When we go to See these places you will be intersted. But the weather of Oman sometimes will affect your intersted, because as we know Oman has hot weather in summar.
This short description of my country. I love my country so much.
can you help me please..it is right or not??

Where are you Shath,we are waiting your try.

thanks my dear I will try to help her

Oman is my country.It is a beautiful place in the word.I love it so much and I can not or can't leave it.I Iove it's beaches, sands, stones and every things in it.For examples my favorite places in oman(.)Muscat,Salalah,Rustaq,Nakhal,Nizwa and Musandam.I love my home.



This is my try and I hope it is correct.

Thanks Sout Al-Fajer for your efforts..but try to find the mistakes in the undeline words.Take your time,I'm waiting.and if you have any questiones you can ask.

Hi dear Al fajer,Iwil help you here to see what's behind the underline words.Sand and stones are uncountable .that means there is no need to add S.hope my explanatios is clear.]

thanks my dear for your explaination
it is very clear

I dont know what happened to the rest,at the beganing were happy to have eglish part in the forum,but now only two who joing with us.any way what i need now is write short story that happened to you and what did you learn from it,no matter if it is happy or sad story?goodluck and I'm waiting .

hi all just I have a comment to Sout Alfajer you have corrected this sentence in this way: I Iove it's beaches, sand, stone and every things in it. My comment in this sentence, the write answer is not (it's) but (its) because it's means two words which are (it) and (is) but (its) witout apostrophe is one word which is a possessive pronoun refers to Oman and it is the right answer here. I hope you get it..

Thanks dear for your comment.